Friday, 14 July 2017

Winter learning journey / Day 6 activity 1

For this activity I had to pretend that I was on the first waka to Shag point. Also that I'v never been to New Zealand before and I had no idea what to except. After all of this experience I have to write a poem about when I arrived at NZ.

Saw a beautiful land with trees and nature.
I was nerves but I had a lot of plans. 
I saw a new future but also saw a lot of wild life.
Feel like I could come here twice.
Suddenly other people appeared. 
Nothing could compare.


  1. Hi Savelina. I really like your poem. You have a couple of rhymes near there end, which I think is great. Remember to double check your work before posting it.

  2. Hey Savelina!

    I love that your poem rhymes! It's also cool to hear the excitement in your poem - that you were nervous but you knew you had to go because you had great plans for what you were going to do when you got there!

    Well done!

    Nicky :)

  3. Hello Savelina, your poem sound amazing. I like how you have added some rhymes in your poem. Remember that you proof read your work before you publish it on your blog. Anyways you are doing a fantastic job. Keep it up.