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Wednesday 23 March 2016

Telling a lie Narrative writing

Once upon a time there was a little girl called Rose. She was very lonely and had no friends. The one thing she wanted the most was to have friends. She had an older brother called Lake. He loved sport and love to take care of people who really needed help. The one thing that he hated the most were lies.

One lovely but windy Monday Rose and her brother went to school. Rose saw everyone playing and having fun. She was so lonely that no one could even say even one single word to her. She was so envious  of seeing everyone have fun but her. Rose got to a point when she just wanted to move to another country. One day she wanted to go to America but her mother said to her “try and make friends in your own country first”. The second day she went to school and went up to a girl. As soon as she went up to her she got stressed out because the girls started to talk to about how fun it  was to have a friend right next to them. They emphasized all the good times they had together. Rose had never had that feeling in her life. She got really annoyed. Then that’s when she got to the point when she just wanted to get out of school.  She was desperate to make friends and she would tell others how she had lots of friends and how her family were rich. One day she was so popular that she threw a party and the whole school wanted to go to her party. When the party started Lake was there. He heard everyone saying all the lies that Rose told everyone, but lake knew that something was wrong because it was the first time that Rose had thrown a party. Everyone wanted to come. Lake was really really annoyed because everyone could not stop talking about how cool was Rose. Lake started to crumble down then suddenly Lake told everyone the truth.

Everyone was really surprised, then everyone was against Rose when the truth came out. Everyone was about to go home. Lake told them to all stop and wait. Lake gave the reasons why Rose was telling lies. He said that she was lonely and no one wanted to play with her. Then everyone stopped for a moment and started to feel sorry for Rose. Everyone apologized to Rose. Everything went back to normal   Rose had lots of new friends. Then they lived happily ever after.

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