For this activity I had to pretend that I was on the first waka to Shag point. Also that I'v never been to New Zealand before and I had no idea what to except. After all of this experience I have to write a poem about when I arrived at NZ.
Saw a beautiful land with trees and nature.
I was nerves but I had a lot of plans.
I saw a new future but also saw a lot of wild life.
Hi Savelina. I really like your poem. You have a couple of rhymes near there end, which I think is great. Remember to double check your work before posting it.
I love that your poem rhymes! It's also cool to hear the excitement in your poem - that you were nervous but you knew you had to go because you had great plans for what you were going to do when you got there!
Hello Savelina, your poem sound amazing. I like how you have added some rhymes in your poem. Remember that you proof read your work before you publish it on your blog. Anyways you are doing a fantastic job. Keep it up.
Hi Savelina. I really like your poem. You have a couple of rhymes near there end, which I think is great. Remember to double check your work before posting it.
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ReplyDeleteI love that your poem rhymes! It's also cool to hear the excitement in your poem - that you were nervous but you knew you had to go because you had great plans for what you were going to do when you got there!
Well done!
Nicky :)
Hello Savelina, your poem sound amazing. I like how you have added some rhymes in your poem. Remember that you proof read your work before you publish it on your blog. Anyways you are doing a fantastic job. Keep it up.
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