Hi Savelina, Your retelling of Hansel and Gretel is really good but the spelling of the name Gretel is wrong just remember to check your spelling also speak a little louder so people can here you clearly and last but not least you really need to write a blurb telling about using we video and your retelling of Hansel and Gretel.
Hi Savelina,
ReplyDeleteYour retelling of Hansel and Gretel is really good but the spelling of the name Gretel is wrong just remember to check your spelling also speak a little louder so people can here you clearly and last but not least you really need to write a blurb telling about using we video and your retelling of Hansel and Gretel.